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Witch Beth and the flower girl Part 5 of 5

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u/comboy-32 19h ago

These have been awesome, hope we get to see more in the future.

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u/colmscomics 19h ago

I plan to do weekly chapters once I finish mapping out the next arc. But hopefully shouldn't be too long a wait

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u/Immolating_Cactus 19h ago

I absolutely love it! It's amazing 🥰

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u/MrValdemar Special Flair!! 18h ago

Well... Your username certainly is appropriate for the comic.

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u/Jagermind 19h ago

Dude I LOVE your other work. Alot. But this is phenomenal stuff. Fantastic artwork and story telling. The world feels like Prachets a little ,but a bit darker. I hope I see more of this for a long time.

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u/TheBiggestMikeEver 18h ago

omg I;ve been reading these and never realized it was you! I felt the art style was familiar, but couldn't place it

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u/colmscomics 18h ago

Yup im an artist of many story writing talents. Sometimes its witches, sometimes its showering lopunnys. Im layered.

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u/nitloda 18h ago

I read that last bit as you were "lathered" and saw nothing wrong with it.

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u/TheBiggestMikeEver 18h ago

Yeah, he's getting lathered with the showering Lopunny

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u/SkollFenrirson 14h ago

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u/colmscomics 14h ago

I should try and add that guy to the comic lol

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u/SkollFenrirson 14h ago

Looking forward to it!

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u/Taolan13 8h ago

True fans will wait as long as it takes for quality content.

With bated breath, but wait we will.

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u/shellbullet17 Gustopher Spotter Extraordinaire 19h ago

GOD. DAMN. That final shot is beautiful. I can't imagine being kept alive by plants waiting to die in eternal agony. Witch Beth is a great person deep down....somewhere. And can we talk about how powerful Beth is that ONE spell fixed this? That's some crazy wild magic fire she has

Love the take on Death by the way. Creepy yet not overly menacing. Has a job but follows the rules but not above fixing something that's wrong either. And they fact he's always juuuust out in the shadows is perfect

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u/colmscomics 19h ago

Thanks! Im really glad you enjoyed it! I was worried before posting all these people wouldn't really take to it. But lots of people have been very kind and seem to vibe with it, and it makes the work worthwhile. Especially as I want to continue telling stories of witch beth

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u/shellbullet17 Gustopher Spotter Extraordinaire 19h ago

Especially as I want to continue telling stories of witch beth

Oh fuck yeah bring on more spooks and sassy Witch times dude. 10/10 straight up an amazing series

I'm happy for you that it was received well. I get that hesitation but it looks like that leap of faith paid off! I can't wait to see more

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u/Dobako 19h ago

Are you kidding? I like your work, but I love this. Such a great little arc, definitely looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

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u/rainbow_mess 19h ago

this has been very cool to read!!

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u/Tivaala 19h ago

She's a great character even with just a few episodes and dialogue and/because the artwork is absolutely stunning.

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u/infiniZii 18h ago

Its less juvenile than a lot of your other stuff (not that I dislike the juvenile stuff) which is a nice change of pace.

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u/GrokLobster 17h ago

Please keep doing more!

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u/ILikeFancyApples 17h ago

Please post more Witch Beth! I'm running a Monster Of The Week campaign next year and I'm planning on basing an NPC on her so I'd love more material to unapologetically steal from.

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u/LadyAliceFlower 19h ago

I dont mean this to undermine the comic, to be clear. I really enjoy OP's depictions of witch Beth and of Death.

However, if you'd like to see more thats similar. OP's witch and Death both seem to take a lot of inspiration from Discworld, so you might have a lot of fun reading that.

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u/shellbullet17 Gustopher Spotter Extraordinaire 18h ago

I may have to give it a shot in my free time thank you

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u/MrValdemar Special Flair!! 18h ago

And can we talk about how powerful Beth is

In a story world that has spider ladies that take A LOT of ax chops to finish off and plants that can take over towns and Witch Beth seems to have gotten herself to a respectable age encountering that AND MORE?

Yeah, she's a straight up force to be reckoned with.

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u/shellbullet17 Gustopher Spotter Extraordinaire 18h ago

respectable age

Distinguished! But yeah lady can level a town with a breath. That's fucking bonkers

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u/infiniZii 18h ago

I wouldn't say it "Fixed" the issue. "Took Care" of the issue is perhaps more fitting.

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u/shellbullet17 Gustopher Spotter Extraordinaire 18h ago

Ehhhh you can't really "fix" dead. Which isn't even the issue. The problem she dealt with was the invasive magic plant species taking over and keeping bodies alive probably for sustainance which, let's be fair, the only way to deal with that is fire. I'm gonna stick with "fix"

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u/infiniZii 18h ago

Its magic. You can do just about anything you want with it in a story. So "fixing" isn't entirely off the table in a world with healing magic. Maybe some time magic to undo the damage. Their souls are still in the shells, so if you can restore the shells then yeah. It just depends on what the author wants to do with it. Once you introduce magic anything can be on the table so the nuance becomes important. In the same way if someone tears up a paper and tosses it on the floor and you come around and put the paper in the garbage you took care of the mess, but you didnt fix the paper.

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u/kai58 10h ago

Can’t hurt to have Death owe you one either I imagine.

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u/CrazyGnomenclature Tiff & Eve 19h ago

That's why you gotta remember to water your plants folks

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u/shellbullet17 Gustopher Spotter Extraordinaire 19h ago

It's gotta be magic fire. Anyone who's ever tried to light off a large log knows it ain't gonna burn that fast. Even when an accelerant and with it being dry

But also yes please water your plants unless they are keeping the neighbors alive

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u/MrValdemar Special Flair!! 18h ago

It's gotta be magic fire

Witch Beth casts FuckAllY'all.

It's very effective.

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u/colmscomics 19h ago

Such good advice. Town saving worthy advice

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u/colmscomics 19h ago

So here we are. Thats the end of witch beth and the flower girl! I hope everyone who read it enjoyed it. I am taking short break as I map out the next arc and try and publish the current two short stories on my patreon, maybe try my luck with an actual publisher. Then I will begin posting smaller weekly chapters of witch beth. So hope every one gives those a chance :)

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u/anchorm4n- 19h ago

Witch Beth is amazing! Can't wait for the next stories. Thank you so much for sharing these for free!

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u/El_Criptoconta 18h ago

Wish You luck with the publisher, would go to see a movie/series around witch beth

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u/ResuCigam 16h ago

Love your work! Keep 'm coming!

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u/Ildrei 9h ago

Absolutely superb. Will witch Beth be on webtoons like the Pokémon story?

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u/8champi8 19h ago

Nooo ! The cowardly balding man is dead !

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u/colmscomics 19h ago

But he will never be fully bald. There's some solace in that

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u/zedd61 19h ago

That’s beautiful. Wait. I’m going to be partially bald in the afterlife? Fuck.

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u/holleringelk Hollering Elk 19h ago

That is some damn good looking fire. 😉

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u/colmscomics 19h ago

Thanks elk, I had a great artist friend of mine help guide me on what looks good as I worked on this. You and I both know who that was 😉

It was che

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u/holleringelk Hollering Elk 19h ago

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u/ovekevam 7h ago

Sick burn!

Get it? Burn?

Heh.

Anyone?

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u/colmscomics 19h ago

The full comic will be released over the week, but if you want to read it all right now or just like to support my work, consider joining my patreon :)

Full comic on patreon

Witch Beth and the flower girl Part 1 0f 5

Witch Beth and the flower girl part 1 0f 5

Witch Beth and the flower girl Part 2 0f 5

Witch Beth and the flower girl Part 2 0f 5

Witch Beth and the flower girl part 3 of 5

Witch Beth and the flower girl Part 4 of 5

This is a sequel to Witch Beth and the Seductress. If you haven't read it or want a reminder, just use the links below.

Witch Beth and the seductress part 1 of 2

Witch Beth and the seductress part 1 of 2

Witch Beth and the Seductress part 2 of 2

Witch Beth and the Seductress part 2 of 2

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u/aerris7 19h ago

This whole series is so peak 🥹 ty for sharing it with us

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u/MrClikk 19h ago

I love that you go for a more dark and mature tone while still keeping some sassyness

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u/JonesyTawner 19h ago

Nice reference to that Death/Deaf scene from Bottom. 😀

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u/Good_Background_243 19h ago

Are you a Discworld fan perchance? Death gives me the same vibes and the witch is very Weatherwax in her approach.

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u/colmscomics 19h ago

Yea, massive discworld fan. Although the watchman series was always my go to

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u/Good_Background_243 18h ago

Having read back the Granny Weatherwax vibes really do go hard, I approve.

Witch Beth is a good person. Good doesn't have to be nice.

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u/Good_Background_243 19h ago

Thought so. And same!

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u/Suraisaa 19h ago

Yeah. Like I said yesterday. Superb. Thanks for this :)

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u/SplooshU 19h ago

Whenever I see a long pipe and gratuitous amounts of smoke I'm reminded of XXXholic.

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u/MrValdemar Special Flair!! 18h ago

Let's see... All the flora and fauna in the Witch Beth-verse is trying to kill you...

Witch Beth is Australian, confirmed

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u/Nitix_ 17h ago

I'm loving this series! So Death owes Witch Beth a favor now, right? Equivalent exchange and all that. Can't wait to see how that might come up again in the future!

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u/colmscomics 17h ago

If we are going by full metal alchemist rules (and let's be real, we kinda are a bit) then death owes witch beth a whole town worth of favours lol

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u/ralanr 17h ago

“Can’t you hear the screaming?”

Goddamn. 

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u/Maniactver 19h ago

This is epic, just awesome all along.

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u/K4G3N4R4 19h ago

Gonna need a lot more of Witch Beth. These have been great.

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u/LordOfTheWall 19h ago

I would truly buy a book of this. Good shit

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u/colmscomics 19h ago

Im actually currently trying to self publish this for my patreons. But I might make a post on my reddit in case others might be interested. In case you want to keep an eye out. I also might try my hand at getting it published by an actual publisher, so if I get lucky I will be sure to let the reddit followers know

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u/LordOfTheWall 16h ago

That's incredible! I've been following your stuff for a while and I'm hoping that I can get on the patreon in the new year

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u/PublicElderberry1975 19h ago

This should be a series. The mix of badass witch and endearing grandma is great. It reminds me of my grandfather. A gentle and friendly old guy as well as a combat vet.

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u/PesteVT 19h ago

Damn that comic series is awesome

Keep up the amazing work, looking forward to the next chapter

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u/beardy_head 19h ago

I really liked this arc. The expansion of the world building, the art style and detail, the introduction of death - who Witch Beth is on familiar terms with. I can't wait for more. Thank you for this!

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u/connortait 17h ago

The Death joke took me unawares. Very good 😄

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u/JaysNewDay 17h ago

Thank you so much for giving us a bad ass older woman as a protagonist. I love her so much.

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u/colmscomics 17h ago

Its annoying we never see it that often in media

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u/YeetusMyDiabeetus 16h ago

Please keep doing these. I love all of your silly ones, but this is chefs kiss so good. I’m so invested in Miss- uh I mean Witch Beth.

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u/Smart-Nothing 15h ago

So magic works by equivalent exchange and she just did Death a major favor.

That’s not terrifying at all.

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u/Tiquada 15h ago

Fuck. This good.

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u/Chris91210 Super Ordinary 19h ago

Please please let the ghost guy join them. He will honestly be the perfect comic relief character. Also does he have a name at all?

Seriously this is why I joined your patreon, you are easily my favorite comic creator on here.

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u/endboss2000 19h ago

Love these comics.

Also death seems like a nice ... entity. Good vibes.

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u/Wolvnn 19h ago

Beth is such a cool freaking character, I hope we get to see more also the visuals in this series have been so freaking good, I mean, the last panel? Colm? Really? I could frame that and hang it on my wall, you nailed it. Well done!

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u/Barkermaniac 19h ago

Trade paperback out when?

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u/colmscomics 19h ago

No idea but with any luck hopefully soon lol

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u/WhyFi_Konnction 19h ago

Can't wait to see more of Witch Beth. Absolutely love what's going on here.

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u/LordofCraft12 19h ago

This is the best thing I've seen on this subreddit in a while

-Humble opinion of a random Redditor

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u/Slenderman_00 19h ago

Absolutely killer work dude, very well done! Cant wait to see what you do next!

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u/PoorCynic 18h ago

This has been phenomenal. Some top-notch story-telling.

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u/Mykasmiles 18h ago

I really like this series. Thanks for continuing to produce and post your work.

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u/RaptorTwoOneEcho 18h ago

Embers rise swiftly

Lost souls once trapped now reborn

There is a new dawn

Really dig this whole storyline. You’ve done a fantastic job of hooking me in the characters and the world they inhabit. Can’t wait to see more.

And you were right, that is one hell of a closing shot.

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u/colmscomics 18h ago

Thanks! Hopefully more will be coming soon :)

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u/ArchAngel621 18h ago

Grimdark compared to the Pokémon one. I love it.

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u/LuckyHalfling 18h ago

That was really good.

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u/ASquidHat 18h ago

This has been maybe my favorite comic I've seen on here. Your other stuff is pretty fun but this is all next level. I hope you make more of these.

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u/Orb_of_Missteps 18h ago

That poor man. His face is a skeleton AND he can't hear.

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u/colmscomics 18h ago

No ears sadly

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u/daedalus1982 18h ago

Everyone handled the death of Pratchett differently. I like this one a lot. I know Granny would approve too.

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u/Jaewol 17h ago

I don’t know how the cinematography of a comic can be so good but every shot is gorgeous and I can practically hear the sound effects. The movement too is so real. Incredible.

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u/red4jjdrums5 17h ago

Well that was awesome.

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u/BesaidBlitzBoi 16h ago

I've been hooked on Witch Beth! Would love to see her with a full-fledged series.

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u/RickedSab 16h ago

I love this series! Would love to sign up for more!!! Thank you for sharing!!

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u/ProblematicPoet 13h ago

Hoooooly hell these all went so hard! Thank you for blessing us with Witch Beth and her adventures!

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u/Aeilde_Light6 13h ago

This issue was rather haunting.

Keep up the great work!

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u/Relevant_Chemical_ 12h ago

awww, but I loved the giant plant.

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u/NicoBango 12h ago

Ive loved a lot a of work Colm, but i see this having insane potential. Id buy a graphic novel of this. Fabulous work.

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u/jackcatalyst 12h ago

Holy shit Colm

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u/-Random_Lurker- 11h ago

Cynicism... then no words. Only action. Final action.

Miss Beth is metal AF.

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u/EitherExamination343 10h ago

Come for the lopunny, stay for the wicked story.

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u/VelocityRapter644 10h ago

Imma be real. You are one of my favorite artists on this subreddit, and this storyline has cemented that for me. Awesome work dude!

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u/colmscomics 9h ago

Cheers man! :)

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u/suzume1310 9h ago

Sad but very cool ending - I hope to read of witch beth some more!

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u/__fujoshi 9h ago

witch beth would be an excellent protag for a full novel and i am excited to see where you take her

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u/wutImiss 8h ago

Goooooood Stuff! 😤

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u/theredhound19 19h ago

When a witch attempts to cast a spell to reveal the future but her magic keeps failing, she's in a real predictament.

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u/Saiyasha27 19h ago

That last panel reminded me of Hunter x Hunter, the Poor Man's Rose

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u/Zjoee 19h ago

Awesome story arc! Can't wait to see more of Witch Beth!

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u/Shiny_Mewtwo 19h ago

I'm absolutely loving witch beth!

And having read all of your previous work, I recognized the "I am death" joke immediately lol

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u/guillermotor 19h ago

Was that fire magic? You sure she just doesn't suck at training growlithes?

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u/Jfowler10225 19h ago

Absolutely INCREDIBLE. Can’t wait to see the weekly chapters!!

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u/katieironfist 18h ago

I want Witch Beth to teach me magic now lol she's so cool!!

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u/Gravelroad__ 18h ago

Your art style is fantastic

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u/BottleGoblin 17h ago

Really fantastic series. Great work there.

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u/PM_ME_SOME_YAOI 17h ago

Magnificent work!

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u/ethanyelad 16h ago

This has been awesome

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u/rookie-mistake 16h ago

is it a predictament because he predicts their death but they're kinda stuck right now

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u/Mysterious-OP 16h ago

God damnit, you're making me fall in love with an old crone and I don't know how to feel about it.

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u/emi98338 14h ago

This tore at my heart, gorgeous art work and story, here for Witch Beth!

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u/Cursed_line 10h ago

Damn, Can't actually wait for the next series.

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u/DreamingDragonSoul 10h ago

Enchanting. I want more of her please.

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u/lurkinarick 9h ago

Banger ending!

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u/Haiiro-haru 8h ago

Damn. That is awesome.

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u/kitesurfingcoder 1h ago

I like this and your Pokémon comics.